This review is based on the first hundred pages or so (the first
four stories), since I felt that was an appropriate amount of time
spent waiting to be captivated, impressed, compelled to continue
reading. Sadly I was not.
Reading this book has helped me to define the saying "Don't let the
truth get in the way of a good story". To explain: it is obvious
that Lam has taken stories or anecdotes directly from what he has
seen or heard in the medical field. With this I have no problem.
But I can see where his desire to inform impedes on the story. To
speak musically, the leitmotif of his Take All of Murphy is the
scene where the characters suffer the moral dilemma of either
satisfying medical procedure and cutting through the symbol
(tattoo) of a man's life, or harmlessly slicing around it. An
excellent idea (in fact it was someone's summary of that idea which
moved me to pick up the book in the first place). Every little
inflection and melody of the story should revolve around this
moment. But Lam creates great discord by straying from the truth
and trailing off into exposition. All of the italicised parts of
this story (where we are shown snippets of past interviews and
such) should have been cut. There is an overall sense of weakness
in the prose. A lightness. There is no, shall I say, muscle to it.
This critique serves well for the first four stories I read. Some
had good ideas (for this Lam earns a star), but they were drawn
out, lost somewhere in mediocre craft, poor pacing, and a missing
sense for mood.