Without sounding snobbish, this is a book for less-sophisticated
readers. It has the zany characters and outlandish situations
that'll attract you, but its plot crumbles under the slightest
criticism. Maybe that's Gibb's fault--I blame her editor. Everyone
in the book seems to do things immediately and covertly--get
married, move in, move out, sleep with kindly waitresses, get
through highschool and into a good university. And we can't always
figure out how or why. Gibb seems focused on making things weird.
Why can't she take a minute and delete the cutesy cliches/cliched
characters that mar this novel? Again, her editor has done an
abysmal job.
Prose-wise, this novel is okay. I can't believe Gibb gets away with
stacking adjectives, but everything reads fine as long as she's not
trying to uncover some deep human paradox via sentence fragments.